Sadness

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  1. hawk 256 aldokraas

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    Sadness
    I don't need you
    Bring me happiness instead
    Because it is happiness that I need
    Badly in my life
    Yes I am sorry for feeling grumpy today
    That is because I didn't get enough sleep
    Yes I went very late to bed
    I broke some rules
    That my Father made for me
    He made a sleep schedule
    It is for me to go early to bed
    If I do that i will get plenty of sleep
    I can't survive with little sleep
    That is the whole truth
    AIso I am not a morning person
    That is the truth
    Father bring peace to my life
    Because I have no peace in my life
    I am always worrying sick to death
    About my life
    Yes I know the morning will end soon
    My Father
    I am looking forward to the afternoon
    I want so bad to have a little nap
    Father you don't have to worry
    About that
    I made the choice to have a afternoon nap
     
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  2. Native Vee

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    Very nice......Alot of us are feeling this way!
     
  3. Joe90

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    Well written, I think.

    Does anyone else agree.
     
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    Full of deep emotions
     
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