Scrape away yesterdays face gunshots gonna start a new race start to finish in empty space the man tells us what to chase about and around around and about drink the drink that dont cure drout little bit louder now twist and shout come and help us find some way out and while outside open the door clear a path for many more then free at last we all can soar escaping the wrath of the horsemen four kinda lame i know, and cheesy rhyme, but i like it.. so blah
I like the rhythm, and the rhymes were alright, but somehow I feel let down. It's not very cohesive, ya know? Some of the lines seem to just be there.