the rythym of citizens moving in unison pulsing down the street flowing through a channel i can never trace how could i explain such innocence such helplessness and such grace beneath one sky you can feel the fear drifting down twenty-third street you can watch it washing over you don't need to see clearer you don't need to get any wiser or older it's evident all around us the power that we possess it's evident all around us our listless endlessness beneath one sky
i think this is about human potential.... i like how you illustrate human's moving in a pattern unaware....great piece
how life has to carry on regardless of good or bad. lovely picture of time in motion movement of emotions too. very thoughtful piece here. love n peace from saff
In the words the lengendery(<--speelcheck) Guru you got Skillz. Very moving piece very powerful. Just got to make a few critiques, the end of the first and last stanza don't flow to me, but maybe that's just me. It's only really noticeable because the rest is gellin' so nicely. And a question. Is the third stanza about the enemy?
i pictured the channel of people as people commuting in the streets then i thought maybe its a channel of light that we are following, life is flowing to some distant destination Mellow