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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by prana, Mar 3, 2009.

  1. prana

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  2. Vetty214

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    I liked this one, my favorite part is:

    a numbness that seems to blanket out
    the frantic seizures of each passing day

    it has a very nice rhythm to it when read out loud. thanks for sharing
     
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