Rhymes or Reason

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  1. DrRainbow

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    hahahahahahaha
     
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  2. Candy Gal

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    I love the sun, I really do
    But on the beach, there is no loo
    So what am I to do
     
  3. DrRainbow

    DrRainbow Ambassador of Love

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    It sounds like there is room for one more sentence where Candy takes a ...
     
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  4. Candy Gal

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    Hahahaha a potty???
     
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    On the beach there is no loo
    So take a bucket to do your poo
    When no ones lookin
    Chuckit
     
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  6. Candy Gal

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    Where??? lol
     
  7. Dax

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    Oh giggle!
    When you walk I’m sure you wiggle
    And jiggle
    In all the right places.
    Don’t you love it when I tickle?
    Oh giggle!
     
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  8. Candy Gal

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    I like this silly thread, I do
    Even though I have no clue
    I make stuff up and post it here
    A nonsense thread, I guess that's clear
     
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  9. Candy Gal

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    I sometimes read some awful things
    Why they do that, makes no grins
    Are they real I often think
    Posting sick stuff then a wink!
    No wonder many get a ban
    Some say female, I say man
     
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  10. Candy Gal

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    Time to pour some nice cold wine
    I drink a few, but always fine
    Watch TV and post away
    Before I know it, another day
    Soon I can travel, and fly away
    That's all I have to say
     
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    Well, if a seahorse really is a fish
    Then I fervently hope and wish
    That I never have a sea lion
    On any hook I'd call mine.
     
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  12. Candy Gal

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    Sunday is never a day of rest
    So much cooking and often a guest
    So now I take a break at last
    The evening is really going fast
    Time for my bath, then TV
    Then back for goodnight, I expect you see
     
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  13. el demente

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    People are idiots
    I am a fool
    Fuck it lets get a beer
     
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    LIARS fool so many folk
    Sometimes it makes me choke
    But only fools believe the lies
    They are fools to and make me sick
     
  15. BJintheUK

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    Here's a ditty about the time of year.

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    Look outside it's getting dark
    it's nearly winter I s'pose it would do
    wish I'd had that walk in the park
    now all I can think is what I could do
    when the evenings start to warm up
    mornings won't show frost but dew
    and as the sun begins to climb up
    over the roofs and chimney flues
    to shine on children all wrapped up
    waiting in their crocodile queues
    in the classrooms teachers chalk up
    today's first lesson for them to view

    It's term time now but soon the break
    will mean there's no more school for weeks
    so no more lunchbox meals to take
    and no more cold but rosy cheeks
    as children run in from the cold to
    take off coats and scarves and hats
    then find a hook to hang them on to
    no more lessons that's a fact!

    So play with friends while you've the chance to
    soon it'll be time for going back
    then hear the morning tunes to dance to
    roll up socks and pull on hats
    find the rest of school clothes and
    repeat the numbers you know that's
    the one's you wrote down on your hand
    if teacher asks you your times tables
    can you repeat them on demand?

    Come on now it's not so hard
    to store your lessons for recall
    instead of playing in the yard
    you have to learn them one and all
    and winter is the time to do it
    stay indoors keep out the cold
    practise till you're sure you know it
    knowledge is power and yours to hold

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    :)
     
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    LOVED THAT.XXXX
     
  17. Candy Gal

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    There once was a feather duster
    With feathers all tatty and grey
    The other brooms, in all of the rooms
    Said - Pff get out the way

    All through the Summer, It never had a say
    Inside the cupboard
    It never once, came out to play
    Knowing that one day
    The Mother would chuck it away
     
  18. BJintheUK

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    Here's another poem about winter I've just written.

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    Look out the window on a winter's day
    The land is dark the sky is grey
    The thoughts that flow around my mind
    Are those of someone feeling blind

    It's almost like I've lost my life
    It's almost like the signs of strife
    Are all around in rock and soil
    As snow begins to float and swirl

    It blots out colour turning white
    All the things I know as sight
    It seems to take them all away
    From here until another day

    When from the sky snow turns to rain
    And colour is restored again
    The nascent season soon will spring
    The buds and shoots will soon begin

    To burst forth from the nourished ground
    Our senses filled with light and sound
    And smell and feelings all brand new
    To remind me I have lots to do

    To start the new year off with love
    And cherish blue skies up above

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    It's not that good really, but I just knocked it out in about 10 minutes.
     
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    I love it.
    It brought a tear to my eye.
     
  20. BJintheUK

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    I have lots of poems I've written over the years. Here's one I wrote quite some time ago.

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    Where do you go when your story is told
    What do you do when your spirit is old
    When you were young you were daring and bold
    But now your eyes dim and your hands they are cold

    The blood that runs through you is still the same red
    As when you were born in the hospital bed
    It courses your veins from your heart to your head
    And only stops moving the moment you’re dead

    But in between moments you lived a full life
    When young you were quick and as sharp as a knife
    And when you were grown you found yourself a wife
    Who you still fondly know as your trouble and strife

    Then kids came along and your world was complete
    The sight of your babies asleep was a treat
    But all too soon they grew to play in the street
    And fend for themselves with both hands and feet

    As years passed they grew till your eyes you did raise
    To talk face to face and encourage with praise
    For following dreams and defining their place
    In a fast changing world where you have to keep pace

    So your race is run now it’s time to slow down
    Look back on your life with a smile not a frown
    All the rivers you’ve crossed and yet you didn’t drown
    So accept it with grace and pick up your crown

    Then sit on your throne and admit your time’s passed
    Your race it is run but you didn’t come last
    Your dreams you still dream so hold on to them fast
    Though the wheel it still turns and the die it is cast

    The world moves on and soon you have to go
    In spirit and mind you must move with the flow
    For your life’s new direction will soon start to show
    Then it’s on to the next to continue to grow

    For death is a doorway that leads who knows where
    It’s waiting for you to go through when you dare
    For the rest of us here we no longer can share
    The new life that you’ll live, when you arrive there

    It’s all in the future, the land no-one knows
    The place when we die to which everyone goes
    All you must do is just follow your nose
    Don’t look back at your past while your life you compose

    It’s a story that’s old, it’s as old as the hills
    Of laughter and crying and babies and bills
    Your cup runneth over then finally spills
    And all captured in pictures, both movies and stills

    So open the cover the album’s right here
    Look at what’s past then perhaps shed a tear
    It won’t be forgotten my friend never fear
    It’s a memory all of us want to hold dear

    So where did you go when your story was told
    What did you do when your spirit grew old
    Cos when you were young you were daring and bold
    But then your eyes dimmed and your hands they grew cold

    They put you in a coffin to lie in the ground
    In stillness and silence with never a sound
    In future your grave might not even be found
    But we know that your spirit is always around

    To know and to guide us we hope for the better
    To live by the spirit and not by the letter
    Of laws that contain us yet help us unfetter
    For you were the creditor, we are the debtor

    We owe you so much as we look back to see
    What you did then for my family and me
    Without all your caring we just couldn’t be
    Your life’s work has helped us all truly be free

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    I wrote that one back in 2015.
     
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