to all here just a feeling i had to express to complain inside ,tender waves roll remember yourself .,life the swim. many a words written to express only the comment can reflect. wonder of fluids, ripples intact only the moments ,memories last. remember yourselves ., thats all we have with every rider a human will pass. you wish for states to open a mind washing tides, linger within time... moan to remember .i know you shall for life love is not far.... to complain again, what for. find the ocean the sea,once more.... remember yourselves. who else will.............. your partner parents family, they remember it all to well........................ thank you something tingled my heart this evening so this came out....... love n peace from saff enjoy the ride remember it every single moment.......
thank you again ....... (dont worry if anything sebbi will use better words of advise or replys and stop looking so {shall i say} YOUNG or uninterested in stuff other than HOT............} just my reaction to him this is what makes the world turn i think sebbi needs the lesson love n peace from saff..........
I can't reply to this. Seems strange right? A contradicton? I'm always technical in reply, not that I try to be or want to be, just am. But you are writting consciousness and inspiration, feeling and sensation non-physical. Not mere crisp arragement of nouns, verbs, adjectives invoking thoughts of this or that. Yours is communication sans the crass boundries of stuffy technique. While form and meter it has it is not subserviant to them. No technical reply will do. I would, ideally, say more nice things than "I like your poem" yet my usual manner of reply is not avaliable to me here so I am unable.
