Hey i posted this in the Poetry section in the main forums, just thought id post it here for all the UK people to read it to! Please read it as a piece of spoken poetry, not a rap. I know it has rap elements but thats the way i write... well here goes it, hope you enjoy : --------========rEfLeCtIoN========---------- Calculate the maths. Navigate the maps. Travel through the minds eye meditate, relax. Find time and create the space to make tracks Celebrate the fact that we escaped the traps layed to catch, the subconscious mind Decieve mankind and leave the third eye blind But my insight cannot be impared im visually aware, although initially unprepared for the actuality stifled by the practicalities of creativity i seek freedom i visualise the scene i can see the grand scheme through these eyes of dreams my stream of consciousness is liquid tranquility a turquoise pool of limitless caligraphy my brain engaged in subagratic activity the endangered species released from captivity to reclaim the rainforests and roam the outback in the clouds we compse this soundtrack i focus on peace and daydream about that a fat-cat scheme but we avoid the mousetrap its abstract as an android aspirations seen through computer generated animations a rainbow of pixels, invisible to the fickle your will too weak, your bones brittle my flows' the lone trickle of liquid on the sickle of the druid presence of this the life fluid Life, i persue it with a passion lights camera action another cinematic adaption ___________________ When i rise and open my eyes its like the universe beginning i wake at daybreak the sky's blue the birds are singing and even though the earths spinnin everything in view is motionless for a minute or two as the true colors of mother nature captured in a freeze-frame it seems strange i sit back and watch the scene change I see green plains and picture myself there the city restricts me so i consider my welfare starin at a cracked grey wall and even when things get heated i stay cool the astral vapours break my fall i take it all in my stride use my time wisely and move with the tide utilise the wisdom of my guide unify light and dark to balance out either side we provide stability, attention and care my sidekick, the drum that comes before the snare the sidekick had a premonition of creation i blocked out the noise and watched the clouds in formation from the park layed out on the grass, as the darkness descends i discard simple dens as shelter coz everyday im dealt a new hand and my mind plans to expand you'll see my name on your news-stand you cant distract me coz i see red when im angry and red when i happy... Well there it is! Any feedback is welcome! Peace M -I- X
hey, thank for sharing this here! woo, i championed it in the poetry forum, and think it is very grand!
yeah man thanks alot! lol. What sorta music you into then? I'm loving basically any form of music - except pop and commercial stuff! thanks again M -I- X
im pretty much a music junky...i listen to pretty much anything an everything i can get my hands on! obviously i have prefered stuff, but vastly too many to mention! you name it and we'll see if i like it do you use msn at all?
Wow I love this It's one of those rare poems... It rhymes (which usually i am wary of) but it totally flows too.... Great imagery... *thumbs up* Love Clairexxx
