--------========rEfLeCtIoN========---------- Calculate the maths. Navigate the maps. Travel through the minds eye meditate, relax. Find time and create the space to make tracks Celebrate the fact that we escaped the traps layed to catch, the subconscious mind Decieve mankind and leave the third eye blind But my insight cannot be impared im visually aware, although initially unprepared for the actuality stifled by the practicalities of creativity i seek freedom i visualise the scene i can see the grand scheme through these eyes of dreams my stream of consciousness is liquid tranquility a turquoise pool of limitless caligraphy my brain is engaged in subagratic activity the endangered species are released from captivity to reclaim the rainforests and roam the outback - in the clouds we compse this soundtrack i focus on peace and daydream about that a fat-cat scheme but we avoid the mousetrap its abstract as an androids aspirations seen through computer generated animations a rainbow of pixels, invisible to the fickle your will too weak, your bones brittle my flows' the lone trickle of liquid on the sickle of the druid presence of this the life fluid Life, i persue it with a passion lights camera action just another cinematic adaption ___________________ When i rise and open my eyes its like the universe beginning i wake at daybreak - sky's blue the birds singing and even though the earths spinnin everything in view is motionless for a minute as the true colors of mother nature are captured in a freeze-frame it seems strange i sit back and watch the scene change I see green plains and picture myself there the city restricts me i consider my welfare starin at a grey wall and even when things get heated i stay cool the astral vapours break my fall i take it all in my stride use my time wisely and move with the tide utilise the wisdom of my guide unify light and dark to balance out either side we provide stability, attention and care my sidekick, the drum that comes before the snare my sidekick had a premonition of creation i blocked out the noise and watched the clouds in formation from the park layed out on the grass, as the darkness descends i discard simple dens as shelter coz everyday im dealt a new hand and my mind plans to expand you'll see my name on your news-stand you cant distract me i see red when im angry and red when i happy... well there it is guys hehe, took me a long time and i hope you enjoy it. Its written in a sort of hip-hop style rap but read it how you want to all critisism is read and appreciated! Peace M -I- X
Sorry, not a big fan of hip-hop rap stylez, but shure there is an audience for you too, have patience.
Dammit, i didnt want people to read it as a rap, just as a flow on paper like a poem... please read like a poem and ignore the HipHop culture thingy - i know not many of you dig that style of music but just read the words with an open mind...
accually... i just read them, and i love them (mind if i keep a copy?). its very performance poetry stylee, spoken poetry is a really good place to be working in i must say, because you can put your own beat to it. very good, got anymore? i'd love to read it! couple of lines i really liked... But my insight cannot be impared im visually aware, although initially unprepared When i rise and open my eyes its like the universe beginning coz everyday im dealt a new hand and my mind plans to expand you'll see my name on your news-stand you cant distract me i see red when im angry and red when i happy...
such great flow... i love it! especially 'a turquoise pool of limitless caligraphy' and 'a rainbow of pixels, invisible to the fickle your will too weak, your bones brittle my flows' the lone trickle of liquid on the sickle of the druid presence of this the life fluid Life, i persue it with a passion lights camera action just another cinematic adaption.'
Greetings... thanks for the feedback, its nice to know that people like it. Im in the process of writing some more stuff, im not going to post untill its finished cos im not happy with it yet... and ive hit a creative block :$ so it may be a while with all my exams and shit at the moment... but im sure ill find the time ahem. :H Peace M -I- X
