Rebirth

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RiversClearwater, Mar 13, 2007.

  1. RiversClearwater

    RiversClearwater Member

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    inspired by a very beautiful trip I experienced: simple but to the point

    Rebirth

    Oh Angel of angles,
    may your guiding knowledge
    forever rain upon me.
    May I shed this chrysalis
    and clean the dirt from within my eyes,
    and may I always remember
    it’s fucking beautiful to be,
    alive.
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    this to me is what life is..
    rebirth to grow..and live..

    lovely to the point piece.....

    lovenpeace from saff
     
  3. Ber-Limey

    Ber-Limey Member

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    This part kind of makes think you need to get over yourself.... .
    ...But you totally make up for it with this part. It is really beautiful. As you say, simple and to the point. Well done.
     
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