oh there was a day when the art on the walls the music winding through the house nay the flick of a lighter could stir more a conflict sunday once meant to bring begining brought a mondays end it's all just a silly flirtation just on the way to (?) where, but the end of the road could the tan one stop if not for a smoke a fuck a toke oh bastardized life full of incompetance I suppose it hasnt stopped yet alas, it will happen again (who made it so?)
The first and third stanza were shiners for me...such an atmosphere, I can't even put my finger on it, but I dug it!
(((((( deebabee)))))))) I assume this is the one you were telling me about. I liked it alot. Turned out well and quite telling. Stirred up mixed emotions in me.
that would be this one *hugs and light* Thank you for the response Kitten! 3rd stanza came out quite nicely,if you asked me.
2nd and 3rd stanzas were my favorite. I liked the way it broke down right there and then (kinda) clarified everything at the end. Nice job you did with this one!
