Like a tear trapped wrapped in garnet cradled in your neck you laugh... the sides of your mouth crinkle and your eyes shine like a watery sun. You're everything I wanted but you have a rainstone in your throat.
~* I liked it alot! Damn nice but we are both fond of the same stylings. I grew up breathing Richard Brautigan. I knew "The Pill vs The Springhill Mining Disaster" by heart at the tender and silly age of 14 amd read his novels as well. I finally found a book that has three of his works in one book but I would truly love to replace his novel, "A Confederate General from Big Sur" one day. I still breath Brautigan. Brautigan, the Merry Pranksters and Peter Max (during his psychedelic days) were major influences, lol, no wonder I'm a bit twisted. Love yah B-ness! *~
brautigan all the way. He captures the essence of youth, of purity and innocence, it seems to be as much a part of him as his breath itself. I fear though that I write far too much like him. The day I felt I could call mysel a poet was the day you told me you liked one of my poems better than his...I dont remember which poem, lol! I love you mom!
i agree with all here a beautiful,open feeling of life.... with all we feel even sadness to learn is to live...... love n peace from saff