raindrop

a raindrop,
dancing on my
window.
the world outside
is cold and grey.
the road is dark,
coloured black of rain.
the clouds are taking
a bath in the ocean.
the mountain has
taken on it's hat.
fishermen walking in the rain,
down the path to the sea.
birds fly,
the trees are waving
a sad goodbye.
the rain leave the world
cleaned.
the wind allows me to
sail away.
out on the sea,
with fishermen.
a raindrop,
dancing on my
window.

 

i really liked this poem and your style of writing. great personification

 

thanks.. i wrote this with a little help from my friend bobbyellis!! Thanks bobby!!
i think i should make some new poems from my heart soon...i think my writing style ig starting to change a bit...i'm still looking for the most beautiful things...
well got to go out hunting ideas again...luv

 

an entire scene woven from a simple raindrop. i love it. its beautiful and simple.