Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mmmnuggets, May 21, 2004.

  1. mmmnuggets

    mmmnuggets Member

    i wouldnt write this if i knew better
    you never left your shadow on my kithchen wall
    i didnt run fast enough to decide, and take the call
    thoughts of featherless flights keep me up most nights
    to be not unlike a cannonball to be unemptied by you
    filled by another good bye cruel world hello kitty
  2. scarlettchasingroses

    scarlettchasingroses strawberry tart

    any specific reason why this is titled pumpkin?
  3. mmmnuggets

    mmmnuggets Member

    not really angel i was thinking about a situation.. When i write somtimes i see the story or poem like a movie or a snapshot and i saw a pumpkin in the background so there you go
  4. scarlettchasingroses

    scarlettchasingroses strawberry tart

    makes sense to me....
  5. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    i thought it was pretty good.

    you write like me in the sense that your poems make no sense to anyone other than yourself, plus you title them really random things. same with me. that's cool.

  6. mmmnuggets

    mmmnuggets Member

    thank you....well i somtimes capture a feeling...well try to when i write... its not my intention to have it make sense only to mebut its ok if its only for me....but YES thank you inbloom..your wonderful
  7. mmmnuggets

    mmmnuggets Member

  8. mamasoul

    mamasoul Member

  9. mmmnuggets

    mmmnuggets Member

    gosh thanks thats from my lil soul i mean it might seem obscure by its ripped from my lil soul

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