Pouffe, hehe!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Smiling_Rose, May 8, 2005.

  1. Smiling_Rose

    Smiling_Rose Member

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    The dragon slept in the cheesy dust,
    He rolled in Wensleydale craters.
    He lit the sun with tangerine flames
    And polished his scales so he shone
    Like a comet as he shot through the skies
    And just as I spotted his pearl white eyes,
    And I knew he was real, darting about,
    He fell from the clouds and crashed to the ground,
    And his shape turned to dust,
    Which I swept with a brush,
    And kept in a pot,
    To smoke in a pipe,
    To release in my lungs,
    along with some tar,
    An old dragon friend who’s flown from afar.
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    'wensleydale's craters'

    nice line :) good imagery and overall adjectivenessly um...well it's good really.
     
  3. Smiling_Rose

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    thank-you! :)
     

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