post election poetical rant

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Nov 3, 2004.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    *first off, to the estimated 80% of 18 to 24 year olds that were registered but didn't vote; I really dislike you right about now. If ever an election was yours to decide, this was it.

    That being said, I've done what I don't like, and wrote something in a political vein...

    rising on the wind

    The war wagon rumbles onward
    with a roaring, offensive salvo
    falling on foreign desert dunes,
    releasing oil below the soil
    to liberate from repressive regime,
    to advocate freedom’s serene,
    reincarnated Roman dream
    while we keep telling ourselves,
    this war wasn’t waged
    to lubricate the corporate machine.

    The radio, the television, the paper
    reruns / repeats the lie, "liberty
    is besieged by evil militants
    protesting its reality."
    The political strategists figure:
    fear manipulates clouded beliefs
    to achieve idyllic amnesia.
    Did you forget? What now…
    where was I… oh,

    Israel has the inalienable rite
    to bulldoze the Gaza Strip,
    to construct "The Security Wall"
    expropriating Palestinian townships!
    Sound like maybe a source of conflict?

    And to the moral motherfuckers…
    please turn your webster’s to page 272:
    "hypocrite: a person who puts on
    a false appearance of religion or virtue."

    Remember the words "mushroom cloud"?
    How about "mobile labs" or "grave threat"?
    How can we reelect a lying president
    who’s advancing a war we’ll loose
    and justify it, favoring abolishing
    a woman’s right to choose?

    I send my condolences, and apologize
    to our 1,122 troops that’ve died,
    to the 8,039 wounded while
    doing their job,
    valiantly.

    I send my condolences, and apologize
    to all of you around the world
    that couldn’t get a voice,
    that watched so closely,
    hoping for cause
    to rejoice.

    I send my condolences, and apologize
    to the estimated two hundred thousand
    men, women, and kids killed,
    labeled collateral damage,
    and forgot about.

    Ignorance, apparently, is an epidemic
    distributed by slander and evading,
    reinforced by a media manipulating
    the American mind, for ratings.

    I’m afraid for us, America.
    Our future looks bleak, now.
    With the shape the world is in
    I can only hope that change
    is rising on the wind.
     
  2. FoxeyLady

    FoxeyLady Member

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    I love that It's really well written. I also like the metaphors with the oil.
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Masterpiece. 5 gold shiny stars. 'Nuff said.
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Powerful and angry, but leaves it open to hope at the end. I share your views and like your poem :)
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Wonderful rant. Powerful and intelligent. Thank you for sharing. One of the few things we can choose, besides wether or not to vote, is our attitude. Putting it into words is a craft you do so well.
     
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