poem....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Jan 19, 2005.

  1. for all alive


    fritter,words away, gone forbin.
    tongue,lashes past emotions.
    belong lover,tis time to long..
    long for love,in darkest shadows.
    grasp the distance,danced along..
    long path taken,many discovered.

    now fritter,words come from tongue.
    maybe pen,paper words forever.
    i love you.i love..you,yet life
    longs for rays of touched,
    moments rippled on skin.
    grasp the reflection,tainted within,
    within the path,a vessel well held.
    many yet will be discovered...

    by you me ,

    thank you
    lovenpeace
    from saff
    be whole be wappy........
     
  2. spelling mistake as usual.......


    fritter, words away,gone forbidden......


    thats what comes,when i see a poem so write
    with out drafting.....straight from the moment
    of to fritter..................

    thank you from saff
     
  3. just something to add to my thoughts feelings of the above
    moment....


    i viewed the mirror, well within
    the lines,stories of my living.
    not age to tell,just life from birth..
    yet here again i live and see.
    a world of loving,gentle longing
    within me...
    again i spy,the solid form.
    within my soul water falls.
    not drops of tears even laughter
    alone.
    it happened before,to those
    who know....
    so again i stare,the human thought.
    deep within, behind my water fall.....

    he holds me tight,grasp lovers arms.
    the lines of stories,love making so
    calm...
    what woman,would long,if heart
    flows,
    if moments lasted,while man
    unfolds.
    it deepest wish to love another.
    it happened before,to those
    who know...
    and so again i look,into the inner
    eye of me......


    thank you
    love n peace from saff

    fritter not now
    not never again
    for to love the life
    is not to fritter........

    ok thats enough ,im off
    be whole,,,,
     
  4. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

    ~* Thanks Saffron..I really enjoyed these two.

    again i spy,the solid form.
    within my soul water falls.
    not drops of tears even laughter
    alone.
    it happened before,to those
    who know....
    so again i stare,the human thought.
    deep within, behind my water fall.....

    This part kinda lost me but it may be my frame of mind right now, need to reread things but I wanted to respond. Thanks again sweety. *~
     

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