Poem

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by ci0616, Apr 23, 2010.

  1. ci0616

    ci0616 Banned

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    Got drunk and wrote a love poem yesterday about a girl who i've got mixed feelings about. Too embarassed to show it to anyone I know, but I gotta share it with someone. Anyways:

    I'm so sick of you
    I hate everything you do
    I hate your hair
    I hate what you wear
    I hate your smell
    I don't know you well

    I love you
    I love everything you do
    I love your hair
    I love what you wear
    I love your smell
    I know you all to well

    You're no good for me
    You venomous cancer
    A prayer unanswered
    Inaudibly murdering me with even those passing glances
    A disease
    That brings me to my knees

    And yet your the air i breathe
    I was lost
    I couldn't be happier that you found me

    You make me sick
    I hate your lips
    I hate your kiss

    I love your lips
    I long for your kiss

    Guardian of my sanity
    Goddess of vanity

    I love you?
     
  2. Anniesauce

    Anniesauce Member

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    I love this :)
     
  3. hannah106

    hannah106 Member

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    did you wrote this while you were drunk? it's so... :)
     
  4. Zed Mauroff

    Zed Mauroff Member

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    dude, thats not bad. especially for being drunk. you should keep writing.
     

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