Plenty of Orange Juice!(tell me what you think pretty please)

Here i am all alone trying not to occupy my thoughts, or should i say mind. With this crazy ass contamination that is taking me/us by storm ..while we are lying fast asleep in the comfort and safety of our own sanctuaries...
God what is mine.. I mean what really is mine..what is anyones for that matter...Wont all these possesions, these material objects that society as a majority base their lives on, their worth on ...Wont all that remain here(on earth) when i, when we are gone..I am not taking wealth with me, that is for sure ..I know that, cuz where im going ..i wont need that any of that(nothing of the sort)..Im going to my world , where shit is simply OK...things are good, pure....no expectations, no complications, only exsistance..just euphoria, a glorious state of well being........Oh yeah and there will plenty of Orange Juice.....

P.L.U.R....namaste!

 

What is really ours, good question... Maybe it's the karma you collected and created in you rlife, all put on a tab as you walk out of the door of life??? That's my favorite analogy and makes the most sense to me...But maybe it is nothing like your poem said... maybe your poems right and my Buddist/Hindu beliefs are completley off track and far out? Who the fuck really knows anyway?
Good work... and namaste backatcha

 

Admirable thoughts you have, but they could be channeled a little tighter. Its a tough trick to turn, but with practice you will learn, and your inner sanctuary will burn brighter. Do it for your own sake. Validation(and, the least of all, criticism) isn't needed, for a lifetime of tickled ears or whining wordsmiths doesn't equal in value to one moment of genuine, lucid experience. Keep going!

 

Thanks for all of you for comments and views and opinions.. i value them very much so...i really dont know why i love this poem .i wrote is so long ago..after trippin for like 72 hrs...during those 72 i realized i loved drinking extra pulpy orange juice through i straw..first.... im on this trip about whats mine, and whats ours, whats yours..then im like money sucks...than im like we are more than flesh and we are more than money ...no to wealth...more health...and then i was like when i go my world it would be this and that and that and this....total freedom...where anything is possible anything that is good can happen...and then i was like "if that were so i would have some more of that orange juice" this made me so happy...it felt important..then i wrote what i wrote cuz all these thought ran together...but i didnt forget the orange juice.. the one thing that made my happy ...lol...thanks again everyone.....and for dealing with my ramblings if you have made it this far.



namaste!
say yip E

 

great thoughts 8*)

 

thanks you for i think one of the nicest most reassuring compliment i have ever received...eternal thanks to you....and speaking of thoughts, i was thinking and I was told vitemin C helped enhance visuals,,making my world i whole lotsa betta..im a grinnin..love you all

 

i really liked this one, it has an interesting, humorous, yet unknown charm to it. monologue-ish, in a way; I could really see someone reciting the part where you're describing "where you're going". I really liked it, thanks for sharing!

 

well i am glad to share...it makes me smile when i have thoughts to offer and willing to be recieved ..so your well come and thank you for receiveing