Picture Paradise

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Nalencer, Aug 2, 2004.

  1. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    This is a poem I wrote. I did the first half last night, the second half this morning. It's a poem about peace and love, and I call it Picture Paradise.

    Picture no more battles,
    It's not so hard to do,
    Sit and think about it,
    And it will come to you

    Picture rising up and overthrowing,
    The powers that now be,
    And make this truly once again,
    The land of the free

    Picture no more sadness,
    No more hunger, no more war,
    If everyone gave a little,
    Instead of always wanting more

    Picture what could happen,
    If we all just came and tried,
    This earth would then belong to us,
    Instead of those who've lied

    Picture what could happen,
    If no one came and tried,
    War and hatred everywhere,
    Controlled by those who've lied

    So what I'm here to tell you is,
    There's a choice you have to make,
    Leave war and hatred everywhere,
    Or this world we'll remake
     
  2. hipeeee

    hipeeee Member

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    butiful u should make it into a song
     
  3. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    i dont play any instrument, so i cant write any music for it. im working on learning guitar and harmonica though. someday...
     
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