Peotry Thread

Discussion in 'LSD - Acid Trips' started by Desos, Jul 22, 2009.

  1. Desos

    Desos Senior Member

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    so i remember a long time ago relayer made a peotry thread. figured i may as well make another one and see what might come up. so just put your poems here: poety, prose, lyrics, of any topic.
     
  2. goodvibes83

    goodvibes83 Senior Member

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    well since you brought it up, i wrote this coming down from my last trip of six hits


    Bouncing vibrations echo infinitely
    Perpetuating oneness
    Resonating
    illusions go unfiltered
    distracting, the rhythm
    beats continuously
     
  3. Desos

    Desos Senior Member

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    i'll start it off :p (or close to it anyway, lol)

    with the autumn leaves we fall

    still grasping for our warm cradle

    fate grips us

    soft hands of gravity

    guide us to the ground

    the autumn moon lights our way

    through the void

    and out the other side

    there spring awaits us

    with open arms and timeless joys
     
  4. Sweet gecko eyes,
    Sweet dog eyes,
    Sweet human eyes,
    They never look you
    In the eyes --
    It'd be a competition to see
    Who has the most pain.

    So I imagine your eyes
    When your mind is silent
    (Is it ever silent?)
    And it doesn't make you
    Dead; you're just
    Too alive.

    I like the idea of writing peotry.
     
  5. introspectre

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    through fractal time neither here nor now
    we stride endlessly in place
    seeking answers to questions unasked
    perhaps we've fallen from grace

    wanting to live in the truth of our selves
    we look to another's face
    is truth something that can be held
    or just this vast empty space?

    self enquiry ends where it starts
    in a timeless circular fashion
    the wheel of samsara creates itself
    longing for a moment of passion

    the whole may be greater than the sum of it's parts
    I forgot myself when we kissed
    red supernovas on a cosmic canvas of skin
    I might just know the artist

    suffering is the product of duality
    I long for your taste
    and so I hurt, knowing that reality
    is sitting in still space
     
  6. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    thanks desos, was waiting for someone to make a new one of these, so sad that the old one got deleted.
    the only thing is you should edit the title so people know it's ok to post short stories too!

    Early Sunday Morning

    relaxing
    in a pale blue light
    such as gentle storm clouds cast
    shining through my morning window
    spiral, lazy, sunday
    raindrops on a pane
    soak through my room
    to enter cool hue
    reflection, lazy
    sunday blue
    soft palpitation splash
    aqua aura assumes
    weak trickle down to dry ground
    replenish and renew
    haze fog sifting through
    my room
    chilly pace
    I'm ok.
     
  7. itsallgood

    itsallgood Senior Member

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    Lets see what i can say


    As i sit, i think of it,it being music
    I think as my eye blinks
    Looking out my pupils
    Lights never seemed so bright
    Pens all around me, key board at work
    I doddle a little bit, but music is what i need
    It breaths to me
    I see something in the corner
    Lets see what it is
    OHHH SHIT ITS EATING ME
    I MANAGED TO FIGTHT IT OFF BUT MY LEGS ARE BEATEN
    *sigh*
    WOOO IAM ALIVE

    "The lion in my room"
     
  8. itsallgood

    itsallgood Senior Member

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    I imagined it at some smoked filled jazz club where everyone claps the other way with the snaps....and people take turns reading poetry to everyone thats listening...But iam just on a computer lmao
     
  9. sw0o0sh

    sw0o0sh Banned

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    Here's a little piece of mine, I like to call

    "Unsolicited anamnesis"

    Splash
    Drip
    Crap
    Ploop
    Ouch
    Drip
    Splash
    Never eating Hot peppers again
    Ouch
    Ouch
    Ouch
    Hot
    Hot
    Splash
    !!!

    [​IMG]
     
  10. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    wow.....I had such high hopes for this thread too....
     
  11. Mr.Writer

    Mr.Writer Senior Member

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    High hopes for this Peotry thread? :p
     
  12. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    yeah, were you around for the collective writing thread?
    great stuff....
     
  13. sw0o0sh

    sw0o0sh Banned

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    What's the concern it appears to be runnin quite smooth lol
     
  14. Desos

    Desos Senior Member

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    inch, by inch, by scarlet memory.
    the ancient letters come undone.
    through the iris, on saturn's wings.
    fabric of perception, walls of fear, crumble to the ground.
    resound only, the soft echo of freedom.

    unto the settling dust, an empire is forged.
    through strength and will and valor.
    amid the arctic winds ripe with strife.
    love takes its roots, swaying in the blind chaos.
    growing inch, by inch, by hopeful juncture.

    i really like this one. i should really elaborate more and punctuate better.
     
  15. y Epitaph x

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    sincerity takes my conscious by storm
    sincerely, this is it.
     
  16. itsallgood

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    it was my post...It just sent this thread down the shitter

    I enjoyed everyone's elses though...But my one was one of the worst the of the worst...I must apologize and go back to my dungeon of poetic thoughts
     
  17. Desos

    Desos Senior Member

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    yea what the hell is your problem itsallgood, sabotaging my thread...

    just kidding lol. break outside of your cathedral!

    don't tell me you have no time.
    don't tell me you don't have a way,
    to get up from the bottom.
    it ain't about the battle,
    but the way we fought them.

    i may not know what to find.
    i may not read within the lines,
    but still i followed blind.
    posed questions need no answer,
    only faith to stop them.
     
  18. PB_Smith

    PB_Smith Huh? What? Who, me?

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    Well, at least we won't get graded on spelling :p
     
  19. hawaiiankine

    hawaiiankine Senior Member

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    thank doG!
     
  20. inthydreams911

    inthydreams911 Senior Member

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    through summer days
    and winter nights
    i embrace the warm
    and indure the fright

    i search far and wide
    tall and low
    riding dreams
    until the shore

    till that day
    where death comes
    the end of ego
    the end of son

    but at the time
    i do not cry
    i do not worry
    i jump and fly

    a graceful leap
    into the unknown
    no fear, no where
    the air is torn

    in between
    what is and isnt
    a free life
    a life thats pleasant

    there is no pain
    there is no mourn
    but bliss and love
    forever more

    so when you jump
    from this ride
    do not be scared
    do not cry

    for it is beauty
    far and wide
    spread your wings
    and let you fly
     
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