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the final version, of the first profile banner for spittin-knowledge.com once they are all done, there will be 6-8 seperate right hand side profiles like this "carky" one, tell me what u think, also about the navigation, and if there should be other links there

 

It's nice, but there should be at least one blunt/bowl/joint being smoked, if you ask me. Other than that, cool beans, man:spliff:

 

^ I agreeeeeeeee

 

I agree, also IMO the banner or w/e you call it should have your names or nicknames on it somewhere.

 

im diggin the style and everything, but those ^^ are all good comments

 

each person in the banner + like 4 others will have their own little profile like that "carky" one it will come up randomly on page refresh's

but yea..i'm trying to think of a way to incorperate weed into it

 

Just have a picture of one of you hitting a blunt/joint/bowl. Or just a big beautiful bud being shown.

 

Not to be a dick dig and I'm sure you'd fix it in your final version, but in your quote on the bottom right....it should read you're not your. just a small grammatical mistake which if fixed will boost professionalism.

 

Looks pretty sweet, good job man. Can't wait to see it when it's all said and done.

 

good lookin out!

yea there are a couple things i need to tweak, but overall i'm fairly happy with the design

thanks for the suggestions

 

I think the use of your is right.
You're would make it you are and with that the sentence makes no sence
"Next time i want to see you are face" ?
I dunno mebbe im being stupid, I always pick up on grammar now due to my mum doing a PHD in English and drilling good grammar and shit into me xD

 

Uhm, actually I think he has it right. You're is the contraction between you and are, where as your is the possesive. Using "you're" wouldn't make sense..."See you are face in the ground" where as "See your face in the ground" makes alot more sense.

 

dude, i just looked at it again, and it looks so fuckin bad ass lol... especially the 'challenge us' right in the middle... excuse me im high... what's going on?

ok ok, lets straighten it out: it should read "Next time I want to see your face is when you're being put 6 ft under"

hahahaha

oops edited cause im high

 

Ahh if Show meant the second your that makes perfect sence, you're is correct there.

 

yeah i was referring to the second use of the word "your" which does not work.

 

Yeah it's definitely wrong. The first usage is right though. It should be "when you're being put 6ft under".

 

haha when it was said that your should be you're, in the last example, i was like

what? "when your being put 6 feet under"

thinking your being was like human being

 

who knew stoners were such grammar snobs lol, but it is very much appreciated

 

It would just be a shame for people to see it and assume [you're] a dumbass, because [you're] definitely a very smart person.

 

if you want grammar nazi: change the ending to "under six feet" because you ending in a preposition is bad form. The I also needs capitalization. Nice parallelism though.