Over You

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by the1n.onlyme, Jan 25, 2008.

  1. the1n.onlyme

    the1n.onlyme Member

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    I used to miss your touch,
    but now I really don't
    Could care less if you call
    Ignore it when you do
    So glad that we're through
    surpirsed I still know of you
    I guess what I'm really saying
    Is, I'm finally over you

    Don't know why it took so long,
    after the way you strung me on
    To hear you contemplated cheating
    After all the times I was there for you
    At every call, I was by your side
    Often put you before my friends
    Which I've learned now
    Unless it's love, is a big no-no
    And always put you before myself
    to find in the end
    you definetly didn't deserve it
    And damn sure wasn't worth it

    Wishing nothing to have gone differently
    Even though we ended unhappily
    I'm just so happy
    To finally be over you
     
  2. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    good job, the sentiment is definitely there
     
  3. DroopySnoopy

    DroopySnoopy The ORIGINAL Dr. Droop

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    Stirring, I can feel the emotion in your words.
     
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