Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, May 21, 2004.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    you played a game with my mind and i played a game with your insides after. what a cruel thing it is to seperate,
    and create some sort of insatiable hunger between two masses. one day one decides to bend and falls into the other and it creates this uninhibited banter about nothing in particular. you can call it what you like and no one can say otherwise. it's all a matter of opinion. there's such a running of unatainable thoughts in my head.
    it's such a mystery the history of art.
  2. what thoughts you envoke

    i believe we all have a reason for our opinions...
    and you write with such an effort to tell
    what thoughts do you fear now..

    thank you for this piece made me feel and wonder
    why do we react to each others opinions so.
    love compassion life.
    unity in thought and feelings

    love n peace from saff
    keep writing see what comes from words within yourself.
  3. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    thank you very much. i'm really glad you liked it. :)
  4. fizzy_elf

    fizzy_elf Member

    james! man, neither the time nor the place but i saw someone tonight who looks just like you sitting around the campfire opposit me. he was playing my guitar and i swaer it was freaky and yeah im still a little stoned so ignore me right now nice writing by the way it makes complete sense yet at the same time i have no idea what it means very thought provoking sorry yeeps i shiuodl go :)

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