New poem I wrote tonight, still in its raw stages, let me know what you think. One Size Fits All Hammer down those nails, Close that lid tight, It’s dark in here, but it Ain’t me who needs To see the light. Cut the shite. With four walls around me: Out of mind, Out of sight. I’m easier to understand This Way, Summarised in a line, Cut Down the line, Right To the line. Wrapped up neatly; Place a label On my box, Like the latest fashion, I’m a victim. One size fits all. Salman Shaheen
I like the fact you're experimenting with new styles mate Very interesting... will keep on reading your stuff!
first impressions-it rhymes lots. coffin insinuations being trapped within the brains of theoretical human ideals maybe...yes....i like it...it's raw
i like the new kinda style a lot....its very to the point and i like that....i like the odd rhythm in it....my kinda stuff
