One Murderer, Two Killers

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chiefburningtoke, Dec 13, 2009.

  1. chiefburningtoke

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  2. Zorba The Grape

    Zorba The Grape Gavagai?

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    Very impressive. I enjoyed this a lot.
     
  3. chiefburningtoke

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    Unfortunately, the worse I feel over something, the better I do...How the hell to people write about happiness??
     
  4. The Imaginary Being

    The Imaginary Being PAIN IN ASS Lifetime Supporter

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    Wish I could write poetry like that, am a musician and always get stumped at the 'word bit'.

    Congrats mate, enjoyed it also.
     
  5. Zorba The Grape

    Zorba The Grape Gavagai?

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    It's always something, eh? I can write the words but not the music so much. I'm getting better though :cheers2:
     
  6. serious-minded

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    Pure beauty!
     
  7. caliente

    caliente Senior Member

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    One of your best, chief!

    As for your rhetorical question about writing about happiness, have you never written a love poem?
     
  8. chiefburningtoke

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    Yeah Ive written some-but they were more reminiscent of obituaries than love poems...Thanks to all for reading
     

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