On My Mind DANIEL WAS SITTING THERE WATCHING A PELICAN GROOM ON THE DOCKS, AS HE CHEWED ON HIS PEMICAN, VAGUELY BUT SOBERLY THINKING THAT 'YES' HE CAN DO ANYTHING ON HIS MIND. LIVING IS SPEAKING IN FLAT BORING MONOTONE, DREAMING THE SINGING IN TENOR AND BARITONE, TRUTH IS THE DRUM THAT OUR HEARTBEAT IS DANCING ON, REAL IS THE SKIN OF THE MIND. I HAVE A DREAM AND IT'S NEVER IN DISARRAY, ALSO A FATHER I NEVER SHALL DISOBEY, I LOVE TO TELL OF A REALM THAT IS HIS TODAY, FAITHFUL THE WORLD ON MY MIND. NO NOT A SEA BUT A RIVER AS BIG AS ONE, THERE BY THE TREE THAT IS BIGGER THAN ANYONE, GREEN WAXY LEAVES CAST A SHADE BUT THERE IS NO SUN PARCHING THE WORLD ON MY MIND.
thats some very decent writting, with a variety of emotional tones, along with symbolism and imagry... very professional piece of writting i must say!
