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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jahendie, Jan 14, 2005.

  1. jahendie

    jahendie Member

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    The lady of the waters seends her regards to the skipper and the captain whom pleasure her shards

    The coldness waiting for love in a desert is only lonley till it dies

    The calmer winds wanted to live a lie

    Now in three statements we have loved contain the capacity to decieve the common man's virtue and have spyed through through the eyes of a rich man, a beggar, and his on strife for dramatic effect we could use the wife

    The begger creeps in a dusk for a gift
    The wife is morally obligated to kiss
    The rich passes by with the flip of a scarf
    The strife watches over it's own silver scarf

    The pressure on his brian is in uneven so sometimes we catch him talkling to the chicken as he eats the feed

    But now we have just cause for killing the man he's only captain comet for good shining men with the shiny shoes thAT NEVER DANCE THEY SQUASH THE FINGERS OF ROMANCE
     
  2. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    This was intriguing, but I'm a little baffled by it. I enjoyed it, but can't say I understood it!
     
  3. imaflake

    imaflake Member

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    Hmmm... I have no idea what I just read.... Not that it is bad but I have no idea what it means
     
  4. VanAstral

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    yeah me too.
     

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