off the dam wall!!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Hobes, Apr 20, 2007.

  1. Hobes

    Hobes Member

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    i made this in the view of someone seeing me. this is the first poem i have writen.

    wach' you dooen here. i thought you where good, pure,
    tunneled in.
    yet you are here, not there. why?
    sitten on this wall. why?
    do you need help?
    i can help you.
    o no wate i can not help you after all,
    all i can tell you is to get of the damn wall!
     
  2. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Cool poem :)
     
  3. Hobes

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    thank you:blush:
     
  4. Isil

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    Yeah, its interesting :eek:
     
  5. Hobes

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    how do you define interesting?
     
  6. Isil

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    Interesting as in good, lol xD
     
  7. Hobes

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    well that is not the answer to my question but o'well
     
  8. buddm4n

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    think deeper coooool it
     
  9. Hobes

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    ah ok?
     

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