slinking off the railroad tracks into the undergrowth verdant covered secrets to the edge where eddies live babbling gurgles siren song surface tension snaps merging with a source fluid meets my body following my flow steps against the stream endless incarnations of nature's primal scream shifting through the liquid drifting jeweled whirlpools shed like echos from my knees momentary levity, floating bouyed unlike land mediating gravity odonata orders thrive hetaerina's sanguine starburst celled wings where ripples greet the surface stones met the everpassing mix behind, soft small stoned fish nests are found chalice overfilling gushing passion for such places gaia pours her metaphoric soup rising to a glacial boulder airing like a cormorant evapotranspiration exacts its fee returning to terra reflections on the water river catharsis clarity
I loved the dragonfly imagery. Clean and powerful flow throughout. Lots of spiral and water motions opened dream-like in astrally guided movements.
i so admire the beauty so many of you are able to convey with your words... this was beautiful tundra!!!
Great piece of work! I loved the imagery, it had a tangible nature to it, and combined with an excellent flow, a “spiraling down” feeling was created, as sylvan already described… a whirlpool, indeed! Welcome to the forums! Looking forward to reading more of your work
a delta of time and space the experience of another water nourishes to sooth my metaphysical tendrils exposed, resources funneled to defense, in the caustic concrete jungle Nord, Norte, North, black spruce bogs, acidic sphagnum bedding, the underwater moss of Apam Napat Neptune's cosmic brother, father of such places soothed and warmed from glacial stances to fuse with Her in time, gifting us today, terra's countless lakes empyrean with corvidae, numbers soaring plenty each one to send me reeling, with an inner sparking grin, i bow under this thankful dawning's eve, my rocking chair, it creeks, as the boards upon the dock, venus perched upon the crescent's lip, lingering for mere moments, bisque in color, as it nears the water's edge from here onto the ear, sky & surface, conjoined around the sound of echoed pulsing loon calls, each, a silent cheer that peace is here.
nie, let me know if you find one. interesting, of the three images that come up when Apam Napat is put into the google image search, one is a raven.
it can be such a gas, too.. my wakeful day started at 3:30am to rise for pre-dawn work lucious vapour beauty era a shooting star before the sunrise arrival back this evening the transient residence, cabin set upon the lake, met with a cackle of crows yacking on the beach growing curious of their continuance i hopped up to the window to catch them marauding a bald eagle about 20 feet from me who had been scavaging on a washed up sucker, my commotion startled them all eagle first in full feathered flight, quite large in stature, I was nearly as suprised as they. Once departed, the corvidae inspected, satisfied Eagle had left, they were content and moved along their way. After the sun had set colors still bled along the clouded sky titan hues, blood-orange fires, all mirrored perfect in a glasslike lake surface seriously asking, please shatter me let me show you a bit of impermanence i'll be translucid once again, merge with me for a little, let yourself flow along my cusp flow your tension into the surface, let those molecules be tense while you go under, go deep, and catalyze, like octopus ink mixing into clarity so i swam along the surface paddling like a puppy mouth submerged nostril breathing eyes at the peeling plane of mirror drip drop ripple reflections of glowing nuclear brilliance, firery pigmentation of the atmosphere curiously dancing on the water then i toweled off and wrote this : )
