Ode to Hip Forums: freestyle

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GingerGangaGal, Oct 21, 2012.

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    An ode to the Hip Forums.

    An ode to the Hip forums
    Here I stand
    On a windy pixel platform
    In an internet land

    Seeking the correct numerals
    Time stamps and place
    Seeking to send text
    To find news of life & place

    All it's rich and brilliant glory
    It's trashy understory
    Like an internet whore
    I have loyalties no more

    When it comes to art
    Science and religion
    I am my own superstition
    True to me amongst all I see

    Rape me with your intellect
    A want a subtle poets mind
    Who's spent 50 years a wandering
    Through book stack land that winds

    I want to hear the souls music
    Transpersed through energy
    Bringing my mind to fusion
    Of energies brilliant birth

    Activate a sensual touch
    A mind soft like a feather
    Seeking the soft mist of beauty
    As I lie listening in the heather


    -End


    that was a random poem I busted out just now...it flowed outta me know how it makes you feel if you have the time please. I am par-rac-tice-ing I'd looove feedback. <3

    Peace and love bless
     

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