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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marcella312001, Aug 24, 2004.

  1. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    In this world of broken promises,​
    In this world of broken dreams,​
    do you sometimes look around you​
    and nothings what it seems.​
    In this world where nothings sacred​
    and hearts were made to brake,​
    do you sometimes need a helping hand ​
    to help you on your way.​
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I enjoyed reading and slightly changing y/our poem. Thank you for sharing.
     
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