sorry if this comes across like i'm a dick but i cant belive that you can write this gd when your only 13,thats some good stuff,your realy good man keep writing n posting ,much love!!
It doesn't surprise me that someone of your age writes so well. It is all inspired by emotions so I think you must have been through a lot in your life so far. I really like your poetry, kid. But it would make me happy to see you post something a little more upbeat some time. Peace and healing.