no explanation

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Sirius, Mar 13, 2007.

  1. Sirius

    Sirius Member

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    How can I explain I'm lonely
    when thousands of others have said it?
    Maybe I'll just sit here and be silent
    respectful in thought for those lonely others.
    I'll bury my face in my pillow and remember
    the sweet promises of tomorrow.
    My tears will bring the flowers of a new day.
    There's really no way to make you feel my convictions,
    to make you feel anything.
    Thoughts of your own volition take you far away from me.
    I can only wish on the stars to bring you back.
    Those beautifully constant stars, thay owe me nothing,
    yet on them I insistently rely.
     
  2. RiversClearwater

    RiversClearwater Member

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    nice man, I definitely feel ya, shit gets better though just keep your eyes to those stars =)
     
  3. Sirius

    Sirius Member

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    Thankyou, and I will keep my eyes on the stars









    I must create a system or be enslaved by another mans. I will not
    reason or compare, my business is to create. William Blake
     
  4. imherbert

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    I've read this 3 or 4 times now...I feel your loneliness. Good job.

    I personally can't say the shit gets better, but at least we can write about it.
     
  5. Major Peacenik

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    Man that sucks

    the best I can tell ya is:

    Get active.

    Do something, anything that will keep you from sitting around alone. And I don't mean drugs. Get involved with a group effort of some kind: if it's a new job, make sure you're surrounded by people. If you're out of your comfort zone, all the better.
     
  6. Sirius

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    wow, it makes me so happy that someone is reading my thoughts and giving me advice and feedback, thankyou guys so much
     

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