New Independently Shot Music Video. Please Have A Look & Listen :-)

Hi everyone

Would appreciate it very much if you can spare a moment to check out the new song.
Please do leave your thoughts in a comment to.
Would love to hear your feedback good or bad!

Cheers

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pDDWiSlcEMY

 

Actually I've always fancied getting involved with music videos and adverts. Script and concept would be some of my interests.

The song, I couldn't fault. I understand you are looking for video feedback tho.
OK, just my opinion (you have infinitely more technical ability than me!):-

1)Some really artistic shooting of the street scenes. However, some of it looked liked "In your face" product placement a bit eg Shuh, and the airport.
Nice artistic element in the concert hall parts. I'd have toned down the details in the street scenes, somehow.

2)The convivial part with the couple looked really good. Terrific chemistry. I reckon you could have worked with that even more.

3)The acrimonious part with the couple... maybe not "dramatic" enough

4)The couple, and Chris. I understand its an "indie style" shoot. Perhaps they all needed more makeup/work with the cameras+lighting, for a more "gloss" effect.
They looked rather pale etc

5)Maybe the script needed one or two more "twists". The script wasn't gigantically memorable, altho it all made perfect sense/"worked" fine.

Obviously you've got loads of talent. I'm only thinking how it could challenge the best of the best high budget music videos.
Would really like to see more of your vids.