Naked Dancer

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Necronizer, Jun 9, 2005.

  1. Necronizer

    Necronizer Member

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    Ok this other poem i wrote mmm kinda weird i think tell me what you think.


    Dancing naked on the floor
    Meanwhile im looking in the glases of the Crystal Ball
    Im geting exited,
    Im geting Happy
    The clothes only bother me
    I only like to gaze the mistical Litghts
    On this Spicodelic moment
    I wish to remember forever
    Cuz im.........
    So Happy im naked on the Dance Floor!!!
     
  2. Zion

    Zion Member

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    ahhh celebrating our nature, Thank you!
     
  3. jesse_peace2all

    jesse_peace2all Member

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    heres a little somethin from me..not hte bets but hey,
    under the influence. smiles seen in the blind distance. an unread vistion pulsing at the back of your head. can this unclear water heal our wounds? will this broken ship sail again? sun pounding on your back, grass beneath your toes. the water down your throat is birth from above. the man next to you, his skin is rough, fingers of bone. must we all grow up? push threw the wheat of this feild. break threw the dawn of a new day. breath in the air of a new life.
     
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