my valentine

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BlackGuardXIII, Jan 18, 2005.

  1. BlackGuardXIII

    BlackGuardXIII fera festiva

    Feb. 14th, 2004
    BG13


    Valentines Day
    .
    Of men who have a valentine, I’m luckiest because you’re mine.
    No other two hearts could combine to radiate as bright a shine.
    I know our love will never die and that it’s light will not decline.
    Your touches make me tingle and send shivers up my spine.
    .
    You revive me and refresh me like a summer ocean breeze.
    And when I’m snuggled up with you I’m totally at ease.
    For you I get down on my knees, to pray to heaven pretty please,
    God bless our love and keep us safe, as we live out our destinies.
    .
    Of no love until yours has my heart felt completely sure.
    And no one’s love for me has ever been this strong and pure.
    I went against what I was taught I was supposed to do.
    I dared to trust my instincts and they led me right to you.
    .
    Someday we’ll have a family; this future’s what I see.
    We will both be loving parents. I am certain you’d agree.
    If we both choose to make it so, you know it’s sure to be.
    The thing that matters most, though, is for you to be with me.
    .
    Eileen, my lovely valentine, I love you now and for all time.
    You fill my life with love and you’re the reason that I rhyme.
    My love for you grows every day; you’ll always own my heart.
    So if I’m granted just one wish, I’ll wish we never part.
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

    I like the smart mix of rhyme schemes here. It's a heartfelt missive that's sure to please your sweetie. Write on!
     

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