my speech for english class (help me out here)

alright well here's what i've got so far , i haven't gotten to the religion part yet but religion and economy i think are what i feel the stongest about on the subject


What’s up guys? Well I’m going to be talking about basically how our minds and lives are being controlled and lied to by the media, the economy, the government a.k.a. “The man” and even religion, almost everything around us is distracting us from life.

I guess ill start with the economy seeing that we all love money and material things. What I’ve conclude that the economy is not only here to take our money with there schemes like warrantees that last until about a week before your cell phone stops working or a month before your computer breaks down. By making money the only that can give us warmth and shelter, we are forced to work and do anything possible to get a dollar and of course this is just so the government can tax us and take half of our earnings and using a bit of it to fix roads and such and the rest of it to pay for weapons and things of that sort. If I start talking about how incredibly wrong war is than I’m never going to finish this speech. Anyways, not only is economy another one of the tricks to get them money but all this stuff telling you that you have to go to school to succeed and then you go eight into a job is also keeping us from noticing the beautiful things in life like the sunset over the river and not even that, just the craziness of our mind and how deep it goes. We could do anything, literally, if we simply understand. The mind is an incredibly powerful blessing that we cannot use to its full potential because we are bothered with economy and everything else that I’m going to talk about in this speech.

Now about the media, witch is the TV, the radio, newspapers and things like that. Well we all know that it is indeed the the people who control the news always exaggerate the truth and sometimes simply just lie their faces off.

 

sounds good

 

he's lying. he didn't even read it.

 

ur right

i'm way too stoned to read that drivel

 

absolutely not
too broad of a topic - you'll be jumping all over the place

 

i hear ya.

 

sounds good so far, but through some more factual info in there and maybe even give up some sources of info that'll possibly get some folks intrested and they may go look at your sources and find more sources ya know information, it's powerful. not everyone looks at info but for the few that do it'll make a differance.

 

not nessicarily all over the plae but i do agree that he could narrow topics down to just media and economy and leave religion out. media and the economy kinda go together though.

 

Trust me save some of these topics for later..you are going to need them..dont use them all up now on this one paper...narrow it down to one thing and research the shit out of it..you will need the rest for ALL OF THE OTHER PAPERS YOU WILL EVER WRITE..(I know I sound bitter..I just finished 2 thesis over the weekend.)

 

alright thanks alot guys. yeah i think im going to narrow it down

 

no problem dude i hope you do well!

 

Hemingway couldn't help you out... no matter how drunk you got him.

In the mean time, stick to one subject, don't begin with 'what's up guys' and use spell check.