hey there. first i`d like to say hello to everyone, `cause i`m new here ;-) then to my first thread i want to show you this: Black rain False prophets talking about, our life our destiny Rainforest’s still alive, sounds like a joke an irony The air smells dirty we can all see pollution To heal the world, is not a game or an illusion We see the world hunger, not enough to eat We close our eyes, walking through the lonely streets Strange disease, there’s nothing, there’s no cure Cancer, aids and much more we know for sure Should we stay or runaway That’s the price we have to pay And then before we fade to grey, the message is love Sometimes we get angry, there’s no focus in our life When people get hungry, they gonna learn how to survive homeless people, concealed in the street With no hopes and no dreams, with no shoes for their feet How many guns they have to melt they have to burn Return to good sense, when will we ever learn Fighting this freedom, for everyone, for you and me I know that this world, is the place, for us to be love, DarkRose.
hello there darkrose much love dig ur poem,i love the first 5 lines the most oooo n the bit about 'how many guns they have to melt they have to burn' keep on writing i'd love to hear some more of ur stuff!!
Hi, Dark Rose. I like to see teenagers writing poetry. Yours is good! Some of your imagery is well-honed. Keep it up!
