My Lucky 13

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BlackGuardXIII, Jan 17, 2005.

  1. BlackGuardXIII

    BlackGuardXIII fera festiva


    My Lucky 13
    .
    My tiny queen, my jellybean, my sweet and juicy tangerine,
    it's you I always hoped would someday come to me, Eileen
    I guarantee you'll see that I can be your fantasy.
    You've treated me so lovingly my spirit's been set free.
    .
    If I may say I love you each day 'til I pass away,
    It's safe to say it won't repay the love you sent my way.
    You'll know my goal is for our love to grow, cuz it'll show,
    You filled a hole within my soul & got my love to flow.
    .
    My time, my friend, I intend to spend with you until the end.
    I'll defend you and attend to you, on that you can depend.
    My will won't bend, & the love I send to you is not pretend.
    I'll tend your wounds until they mend, my life & yours will blend.
    .
    I realize the love that lies in your eyes is my prize.
    My spirit flies to higher highs, and for your love it cries.
    I'll tell no lies, and won't disguise my love's true depth and size.
    The sound of your contented sighs implies where your love lies.
    .
    It's no surprise your love supplies the sunrise in my skies.
    My love defies those other guys who hope our passion dies.
    Instead our love intensifies, solidifies and multiplies.
    Please recognize I'm mesmerized, it's you I idolize.
    .
    BlackGuardXIII
    Friday 13th/02/04
     
  2. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

    ~* Beautiful sentiment. I hope it always stays that way for you*~
    Love and Light, Thanks
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

    beautiful! excellent job of intricate, apparently effortless rhyming... not easy to do! thanks for sharing, good to see you in these parts! :)
     
  4. bonnie204

    bonnie204 Member

    perfect
     
  5. BlackGuardXIII

    BlackGuardXIII fera festiva

    I am very glad you liked it.
    It is one of my favorites, that i wrote her.

    Feb. 14th, 2004
    BG13

    Valentines Day
    .
    Of men who have a valentine, I’m luckiest because you’re mine.
    No other two hearts could combine to radiate as bright a shine.
    I know our love will never die and that it’s light will not decline.
    Your touches make me tingle and send shivers up my spine.
    .
    You revive me and refresh me like a summer ocean breeze.
    And when I’m snuggled up with you I’m totally at ease.
    For you I get down on my knees, to pray to heaven pretty please,
    God bless our love and keep us safe, as we live out our destinies.
    .
    Of no love until yours has my heart felt completely sure.
    And no one’s love for me has ever been this strong and pure.
    I went against what I was taught I was supposed to do.
    I dared to trust my instincts and they led me right to you.
    .
    Someday we’ll have a family; this future’s what I see.
    We will both be loving parents. I am certain you’d agree.
    If we both choose to make it so, you know it’s sure to be.
    The thing that matters most, though, is for you to be with me.
    .
    Eileen, my lovely valentine, I love you now and for all time.
    You fill my life with love and you’re the reason that I rhyme.
    My love for you grows every day; you’ll always own my heart.
    So if I’m granted just one wish, I’ll wish we never part.
     

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