my badly written poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by juggla, Jan 30, 2005.

  1. juggla

    juggla Member

    Should I try and hold on

    All I can do is cry cause you passed me by

    What do you want, what can I give

    Just stop and look into my eyes

    Look into my eyes you fucking whore

    My eyes will act as a door, look deep inside

    I thought I could confide in you

    You left I hate you, I would have died for you

    If you came back tomorrow id take you back

    Id take you back if you came back a life time from now

    Look at me, im about to die, I will if I never see your face again

     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

    *thumbs up*
     

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