My attempt

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SgtPepper, Dec 31, 2004.

  1. SgtPepper

    SgtPepper Member

    My attempt at poetry/song lyrics

    Coventry Square


    Let me take a minute
    To tell you a tale

    About a place called somewhere

    I found in a dream


    To the place round the corner
    From the bus stop by the pillar

    I’ll meet you there

    At Coventry Square


    Coventry Square - I’ll meet you there

    Come sit down drink a cup
    Have a meal and eat it up

    Sit back relax and I’ll empty my heart

    ‘bout a place called Coventry Square


    To the place round the corner
    From the bus stop by the pillar

    I’ll meet you there

    At Coventry Square


    Coventry Square I’ll meet you there

    Well you know it’s getting hard to move
    From the road I knew before

    From the gentle smile you gave me

    At the pillar in Coventry Square

    Come sit down drink a cup
    Have a meal and eat it up

    Sit back relax and I’ll empty my heart

    ‘bout a place called Coventry Square


    Come sit down drink a cup
    Have a meal and eat it up

    Sit back relax and I’ll empty my heart

    ‘bout a place called Coventry Square


    Coventry Square I’ll meet you there

    Coventry Square I’ll meet you there
     
  2. Oh dahling I love your rhyme scheme... however...

    Sit back relax and IÕll empty my heart
    Ôbout a place called Coventry Square


    ...that rubs me the wrong way. Do you really have that much to say about Coventry Square? And is it really worth dragging someone down to said Square to listen to its history?
     
  3. SgtPepper

    SgtPepper Member

    i know fuck all about coventry square its just a rad=ndom place i thought of man
     

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