Commotion in the woods- Jostling chains, Human sounds, Run away. As we run, we suffer from fatigue. Unseeingly possible- Reluctantly running- Can not stop. Joshua runs beside me, Building any will I have to survive. Above us flies a huge metal bird in the sky. BANG. I look to my side, To the other, I stop- Look behind myself, Joshua is gone. Forever. Confusion, Noises, BANG.
For some reason this made me think of war. *shudder* Good job on being clear with your language, felt like I was reading a short story.