"'deadly' feelings"(y knot?) "i love you" i cannot say "i need you" but i dont speak you wont either i dont wanna end this streak of attention i get from you sitting beside you on this pew your what i need you do not see necessary for my soul to feed on innocence you are so pure unfortunately youll never see me on the fence as if a chore true feelings never spoken my heart is truly broken my beautiful Lolita my love here is choking inspired by the book lolita, which i am reading and my imagining a change in my feelings about a certain underage girl in my church(yall know the situation)
this poem is a three part peom, this is the first part, and each has different writing styles. the last has very little rhyming, but why dont you like the rhyming?
SUFFOCATION! NO BREATHING! DON'T GIVE A FUCK IF I CUT MY ARMS BLEEDING! DANANANANANNANANANANA THIS IS MY LAST RESORT! lol.. nah its prtty good i liked it.
I love it! It's awesome, and it flows nicely too. I'm glad that you were inspired by Lolita to write something about it. That's awesome. I wish I was that creative!
ah it's fine man. I'm a poet myself so maybe I'm just prejudiced and stuck in my own puritanical ways.