mirror on the landing stairs

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sunflowerAlys, Dec 24, 2004.

  1. sunflowerAlys

    sunflowerAlys Member

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    I stare into it
    as if its shape was purely concave
    and smooth
    as if carved by godly shrapnel
    I force it, feed it my soulful will
    Eyes and mouth wide
    Open for its message, its gift to me
    I see
    She is tall and her edges are soft
    In comparison
    She curves organically, silhouette flowing
    Pouring down dustily over a bony frame
    Flaring this way and that
    Dewy, Paisly, I wish she was unaware
    and cruxing upwards
    in some brilliant speechless energy
    Is this a self
    Is this a self
    Is this a self
     
  2. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    I really enjoyed this. Perfect flow and contemplatitve images.
     

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