Mirage

Hughes spoke of dreams deferred
well mine was a dream denied
and I've been humbled
in this empty light
a stunning debutante
in a condescending romance
craving the horizon
the thin blue line of earth's end
and I know it wasnt fair to you
but sunlight is too hard to paint...

 

hi there

this is amazing to read
how you enter the feel of movement
the human path....

:but sunshine is too hard to paint:

i love this line you finish with {how we dance in rays
we love the view....but to paint our path how how }
love n peace from saff

 

I agree with Saff; this was a wonderful read and yes, that last line is one helluva closer! Thanks for sharing and looking forward to more from you

 

Truly inspiring piece...wonderfully woven images. Loved the development, the beginning and end fit so smoothly...

 

thank you.....

 

that was very good... i love that last line

 

Just loved it~! From beginning to end, the last line was great.

 

thank you, i've enjoyed everything
you have offered so far.

this is another very evocative line:

"and I've been humbled
in this empty light"

 

no...thank you!