Mescaline Princess

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Gregonzo, Jun 21, 2005.

  1. Gregonzo

    Gregonzo Member

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    There is bright white star
    It seems so near that I could reach it
    And if i did what would it teach me
    What I really want to know
    Am I prepared to let go


    There is a figure in my dream
    It seems so real I want to be it
    I'll watch it dance in green and gold
    Then I'll catch it when it slows


    There is an ocean in her mind
    It seems so deep and dark I'll find It
    I'll sink till wonderful shadows grow
    And bask in its basin of turqouise glow


    There is a girl in my heart
    Her love so sweet that I can taste it
    I'll close my eyes so not to waste it
    receiving all that she will show
    The star her secret,
    The ocean her soul,
     
  2. rainbowsareforlovers

    rainbowsareforlovers Member

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    this poem is really beautiful. good job. i rally like the part about the dream. captures alot. good job again.
     
  3. Gregonzo

    Gregonzo Member

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    thank you!
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Well done. I love the vibrant colors.
     
  5. Gregonzo

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    Thanks, yeah San Pedro cacti tend to stimulate the brain's appreciation for the spectrum and render you helpless to use them in poetry or music.


    CHEERS
     

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