Hi this one of my recently poems hehehe still on spanish, but if you like it i can write the english version thanks everybody to take a look. Melancolia invadiste mis pensamientos Tu yugo decapito todos los escarmientos Melancolia insolita escapaste de mis remordimientos Y me invades con tus cuentos Que por mas que lea nunca conclusos estan Porque sales en estos momentos? Y atormentas mis recuerdos? A caso quieres mostrarme algo entre todo ese vagabundamiento? Quieres que camine descalzo en las arenas de tu cuerpo? Para quemarme con tu calor y atravezarme con tu sinsabor La medula hasta el hueso Todo lo invades y me enfermas! Me enferma este sentimiento tan sublime Y tan Atroz Por favor esfumate antes de que me marchite Como una Flor De petalos negros y tallos secos Deja mi cuerpo y abandona mi alma Dado que aqui no seras recibido Por mas que intentes acercarte Tendras que huir si no quieres Apagarte....
ok my spanish is excedingly bad...but umm here goes, appologies for the odd word i cant translate, and ummm the form...but its an idea of what its about i guess very good poem i must say!!! Melancolia you invaded my thoughts your yoke I behead all isolation the Melancolia lessons you escaped of my remorses and you invade to me with your stories That by but which never read conclusion Because salts at the moment? And you torment my memories? To case you want to show something to me between all that vagabundamiento? You want that it walks barefoot in sands of your body? In order to burn to me with your heat and to atravezar with your sinsabor medula to me until the bone All you invade it and you become ill to me! East so sublime and so Atrocious feeling becomes ill to me Please esfumate before me As a Flower Of black petalos and dry stems Leaves my body and leaves my nonseras soul Since aqui received By but that you try acercarte Tendras that to flee if you do not want Apagarte....
Oh many thanks spider it seems that much ppl dont reply me cuz they dont knew spanish -.- however thanks to your answer very much......
