Lovin

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MaryGert, Sep 17, 2009.

  1. MaryGert

    MaryGert Member

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    Through time and space
    With love ignited
    Face to face we find each other
    Love and sweat abound
    I kiss your lips
    And taste the salt
    And whisper just a sound

    We move together
    Without reserve
    I look into your eyes
    My heart is beating
    Let the moment unfold
    Your heart is beating
    There is no outside world

    We touch each other unabashed
    By rules of the mind and society
    we use our bodies and hearts and touch
    and bring each other to ecstasy

    I brush the hair from your eyes
    I lay my head down on your chest
    Your arms are strong
    And hold me tight
    We fall asleep a blissful night
     
  2. johnnykap

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    Uh, I'm picking up a distinct sexual theme here, Mary!!! The title reminds me of that Seth Rogan movie that had the character named McLovin. Everytime I hear that name, I laugh.
    I also like the fact that it's ok (from the female perspective) to fall asleep after sex.
     
  3. brdinking

    brdinking Member

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    You've captured the moment very well!
     
  4. MaryGert

    MaryGert Member

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    thank you Brdinking! Johnnykap, sometimes women say ok sleepy time:)
     

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