LoVe

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sweetdreadlover, Sep 5, 2004.

  1. sweetdreadlover

    sweetdreadlover TattooedRainbowGurl

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    ~~~~LoVe~~~~

    Red blood drips from the roses piercing thorn
    Fermented in the red wine of emotion
    Drinking from the well of my one loves desire
    As I embrace in his warm loving touch
    Heal me of this passion
    Free me from this trobbing pain of love
     
  2. chica17

    chica17 Guest

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    Thats really deep....And i know what ur feeling when u say "Heal me of this passion, Free me from this trobbing pain of love"
     
  3. kidder

    kidder Member

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    We always seek healing from what actually makes us the remarkable things we are. if love is a disease, let us be its host. and your thorn should never tire of piercing... i like it!
     
  4. sweetdreadlover

    sweetdreadlover TattooedRainbowGurl

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    aww thanks you guys:)
     
  5. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    that is deep and penetrating. sounds painful and i dont know that love in its truth can create such feelings. though i have felt this way many many times

    beautifully written though
     
  6. sweetdreadlover

    sweetdreadlover TattooedRainbowGurl

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    yes yes your right hun...its a sort of metephore
     
  7. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Sharp, intoxicating and sensual. Raw with keen provocative metaphors.
    "Give me burning, I want burning!" ~*Rumi
     
  8. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    OH i got that. it was just some of my stuff coming out;)

    isnt it interesting how we can read something in one mood and hear something and then read it in another mood and hear something else?
     
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