-My fist thing here, personnaly I hate it w/e, wanted to share something. Bask in seclusion, with not much to say just waiting for you to show up in my day Your not coming, you never do your much to popluar, pretty preeminent you Overheard wispers, followed by cruel laughing your right, Im nothing worth having You can't make anything with nothing so why do I try this love thing?
work on this dude ... if you're serious ... work ... work ... work ... at the moment it isn't there ... but you had the guts to post ... so i give you a star.
I think Nitrusx is onto something. Yes, it is a little rough around the edges, but you get the point of the poem. An infatuation for someone that is perceived to be out of the author's league. Short. Simple. I like it.
